jeeboomba
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Posted : Dec 11, 2011 15:26:52
hey homies, been cooking this.. chk it out..
i like the perc work.. but bass freqs are somewhat fked i think.. still building.. any comments or advices would be appreciated..
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MrMaunus
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Posted : Dec 11, 2011 19:22
Nice ending! Reminds me of dark ambient which I like very much..
jeeboomba
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Posted : Dec 12, 2011 04:49
hey thanks man.. im planning keep building.. got some more ideas.. cheers
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ierofante
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Posted : Dec 12, 2011 10:33
Nice ideas in this song... However it has to be more developed and less repetitive to sound good.
And yeah you definitely are encounting mixing issue.
Another thing: I don't like very much the texture under the main sounds, the ambientish one (you can hear it at the beginning and at the end of the song). It is a bit random to me, just thrown there without any musicality.
Keep on, mate!
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jeeboomba
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Posted : Dec 12, 2011 12:51
yep long way to go.. and also this is like a first sketch.. gonna play around with more kik bass patterns and automation.. i knw it sound too repetitive...
thanks for the words mate, cheers
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jeeboomba
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Posted : Dec 28, 2011 21:20
here's an update if anyone would like to share some feedback... re-arrange what you thought was real
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Posted : Dec 29, 2011 19:17
The overall sound is very hollow, like there is a reverb on the master channel or something. It might be the kick thats creating the overall feel, but it does not sound very present.
jeeboomba
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Posted : Dec 30, 2011 14:51
hmmm... will chek the reverb thing.. i have multiple reverbs on channels that i've not paid attention... also im working on headphones so maybe im missing out this thing... thanks for the heads-up...
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