moleqlarsuperstructure
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Posted : Dec 16, 2013 01:09:07
so dudes
here a track i experimented fucking lot of time with the subbass. (posted some edits earlier) it has a own subbass rythmic besides the usual bassline rythms. has kinda hypnotic effect for me. u can hear in the first two parts. after it changes but comes back in some parts.
i would like to get some harsh critics from you guys. (i know i could bring out the mids (250 - 1000 Hz)a bit more ^^ thanx for your time
knocz
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Posted : Dec 16, 2013 12:46
Hi!
Why do you want hars? I'd rather just be honest and true. This sounds good
The perc stems sounds a bit weird EQ, like there is a hole somewhere (sorry cant identify exactly), maybe a little polishing would make it sound greater.
The whole idea is great, really nice sounds in the tune, this really sounds great
Maybe you could be a little more wacky with the lead at 3:52, as it has a wonderfull tone but is mainly looped for 8 bars with some slight filter automation in the end -> you could play a lot more with the midi notes, pitch bends, vibrato, and other definitions like ring modulation or pulse width Take it to the next level!
The same goes on the section between 5 min and 6minutes, really nice sounds but a bit static. But then the raise at 6minutes sounds really good -> if I could criticize, I'd say do less breaks after the beat comes back in, cause when you take the bass out of there, you are cutting the flow on the dance floor (people wanna dance, not stay still waiting for another beat to come through)
Towards the end, I would be expecting a more intricate progression than using the surrounding root notes of the pentatonic scale: you could go wonders here. I think something very melodical like a hungarian gypsy scale would go perfect, but that's my taste.
Nevertheless, keep it up! It coming together great!
moleqlarsuperstructure
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Posted : Dec 16, 2013 15:39
hey Thank you very much for your time and lucrative feedback
yes maybe it could need some more virtuoso synth work.
the one section wich is a lil static is meant to be like this. works good in the floor in my opinion
and good input for a diffrent scale. could really bring up more spice i feel you (im an an old remember trancer here )
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supergroover
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Posted : Dec 16, 2013 20:56
The 2nd and 4th kicks are a bit muffled by the snare I think. That makes it sound kinda slow. Maybe eq the snare? Take another snare?
The open hihat as well makes it feel a bit slower. Maybe shorten it.
Overall it sounds good to me. It does not really hypnotize me, but that might be a matter of taste.
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moleqlarsuperstructure
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Posted : Dec 16, 2013 21:16
