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Need some help with track

Timetwister


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Posted : Dec 5, 2006 01:45
Hey guys (and offcourse all you lovely gals)!

Been working on a track, and I could really use some suggestions on what it's missing.

First I'll say this: it isn't mastered yet, so that needs some work, second of all the build-up will probably be rearranged and it needs an intro. This is a sample of what i'm working on. Any thoughts/criticism is appreciated!

Get it here:

http://www.sendspace.com/file/8meru4

Thanks in advance!
Minimal Monster
Minimal Monster

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Posted : Dec 5, 2006 01:53
bass needs to be more subby.
all percs needs to be less midi (put more effects or find another percs)
seperade the freq to mids highs and lows, open it up!
hope i helped a bit..           http://www.myspace.com/minimalran
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Overhuman
Overhuman Project

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Posted : Dec 5, 2006 04:11
i like mate, but i think for been a start neesd to have a litle bit more or force maybe iis a matter of tatses but i found the track that stillstoo simple too have 2 mins of lenght:)           30th of August first delivery money back.
Kane
IsraTrance Junior Member

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Posted : Dec 6, 2006 01:40
I see what you're saying, it is missing a lot..first of all, a bassline, then i'd use different percussion elements..those get a little boring together..the song feels to me like weird uptempo progressive stuff..

Idk what else to say, don't have too much time to think specifically, but yes, a bassline is necessary..theres sort of too little to judge
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