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Need some help with track
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Timetwister
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Posted : Dec 5, 2006 01:45
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Hey guys (and offcourse all you lovely gals)!
Been working on a track, and I could really use some suggestions on what it's missing.
First I'll say this: it isn't mastered yet, so that needs some work, second of all the build-up will probably be rearranged and it needs an intro. This is a sample of what i'm working on. Any thoughts/criticism is appreciated!
Get it here:
http://www.sendspace.com/file/8meru4
Thanks in advance!
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Minimal Monster
Minimal Monster
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Posted : Dec 5, 2006 01:53
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Overhuman
Overhuman Project
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Posted : Dec 5, 2006 04:11
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i like mate, but i think for been a start neesd to have a litle bit more or force maybe iis a matter of tatses but i found the track that stillstoo simple too have 2 mins of lenght:)
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Kane
IsraTrance Junior Member
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Posted : Dec 6, 2006 01:40
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I see what you're saying, it is missing a lot..first of all, a bassline, then i'd use different percussion elements..those get a little boring together..the song feels to me like weird uptempo progressive stuff..
Idk what else to say, don't have too much time to think specifically, but yes, a bassline is necessary..theres sort of too little to judge |
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