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need some advice

Box of Dirt


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Posted : Aug 1, 2005 15:11
need some advice on improving this track.
Its called "iTrance" and it can be found here---> http://www.soundclick.com/bands/9/boxofdirt_music.htm
just dont know how to finish it and if theres anything i can do for it in the mid section
AstRoMetriX
Astrometrix

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Posted : Aug 1, 2005 15:20
mmmmmmmm ok....nice...cool beats.....ohhhhh
but wait......i have probs with my wmp.....i only heard like 30 sec.......

anyway...nice beats...cool pads....i think its nice....

sorry i cant say more.........stupid pc shit!!!
good luck

mo
FaceHead
FaceHead

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Posted : Aug 2, 2005 11:26
totally get a new kick its really old and primitive sounding if its psy get something that thumps this kick is more of a boo than a doof if that makes sense and id get a more muffled lower bass sound for the main bass line something not so buzzy but ya synths and precussion are good but id work a little on the composition too the build up ad the break is good but i thik it should slam in after it builds and it takes a bit long to get to the build just keep at it you got great potential like the break influence like the quote try for some more psychedelia in the back or a melody change if you want to return the favor please do at www.myspace.com/facehead

goodluck

facehead
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