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Posted : Dec 29, 2009 15:50:07
Hello all, this is my first post here I just made my first track and if anyone is bored enough, here it is :
In few places on bass you can hear "thank you for trying this demo", off course it will be erased in final version hehe
Greetings
nevarakka
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Posted : Dec 29, 2009 17:02
I personally think theres to much "trance" elements. and some notes are off key too much. But i think your baseline and kick are ok! Pretty good!. but i would loose all the trance elements. but you are on the right track!! Cheers! nice work!
dj chichke
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Posted : Dec 29, 2009 17:46
i think it's pretty good. very good for first track.
i have one advice for you. your track is very melodic. it's ok. but sometimes leave the melodies and let the kick bass and groove play alone. because if you play melodies all track i think the track loose power and the melodies loose their beauty. think about it and listen to melodic fullon and you will see the melodies are not playing all time.
Abluba
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Posted : Dec 29, 2009 17:50
Thanks for both advices, made me think a little...
BTW dj chichke, i listened to your track...wow its great...
I love your bass and kick it makes me want to hide with my little crap Thx again for advice
greetings
dj chichke
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Posted : Dec 29, 2009 18:03
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On 2009-12-29 17:50, Abluba wrote:
Thanks for both advices, made me think a little...
BTW dj chichke, i listened to your track...wow its great...
I love your bass and kick it makes me want to hide with my little crap Thx again for advice
greetings
thanks a lot! but you don't need to hide because your kick and bass are good.
maybe you just need to clean them liitle bit at the final mix of the track.
Abluba
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Posted : Dec 30, 2009 14:04
Maybe somebody else have something smart to say? Any other opinions would be greatly apreciated
Any other opinions would be greatly apreciated