blueball
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Posted : Apr 16, 2011 01:06
haven't heard it yet but it's a safe bet that your sounds and every sound really can and should use lots of dynamics, and by dynamics i mean more percussion, closed hats between open hats, weirdo patterns of weirdo percussions can make a music a lot more interesting, and in the leading area, lots of leads and lead swapping should be used to make the sound unpredictable and very catchy, peace
I hear the change going on in that lead before the song drops out, changing its pitch, but it's not really moving around or changed at all. Might help if you work that dark mid-bass lead back in there to drive it along.
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psyraal
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Posted : Apr 18, 2011 15:51
Indeed your tune is turning quite nice imo.
I like the opening sounds, reminds me of a factory, those pushing noises like something is pumping is quite pleasent.
The percussion ain't bad, it's just simple, too simple i think, you already have a full on beat, try adding some detailed percussion within and you will notice some improvement, try every single thing you can remember of.
The leads are quite niet, you have them twirling, changing, you added effects on them, and it they did turn nice. Nice job on that.
The kick and bass combo sounds cool now, you low 'volumed' your bass, and the kick sounds uplifting to me.
The only thing i would change in your tune is that starting vocal, but that's just taste and liking thing, if you dig it, leave it that way.
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