ArcaneInquisitor
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Posted : Apr 15, 2010 01:36
Excellent samples and sample processing. But it needs some more psy. The bass and drums are good (possible the bass is a little overpowering) but often they are the only thing playing. Needs more stabs, needs more lasers. Most of the transitions are pretty clean although some (like when it cuts to that filter/flanger for a bar) could be made a bit more seamless.
As for an ending! Well I think right where it ended you might want to break into a short bridge where it enters some kind of key progression different from the song then back into the original key with some kind of epic lead overtop.
Or just skip the bridge part (that can be tricky to find the right chords etc.) and just break into a key change and melody. If you know what key your song is in look up some standard progressions for making the final melody. Or just do it by ear like I do.
I'm thinking I may just listen to this and make some stuff like that of my own. I will let you know if I come up with anything.
ArcaneInquisitor
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Posted : Apr 15, 2010 02:31
Alright, this is what "I" hear coming after your song. I just put this together real quick right now to give you an idea of the kind of melody I intend so the patches and balance are shit and it is just generally a VERY rough idea.
In my mind the first new sound I introduce, the psychedelic one, I would intended t sound like that part in Infected Mushrooms Song Pong at 4:00. Something like that kind of sound. Then i have it moving into that bending reverbed lead.
If you like where I want to go with it then i can maybe put more work into it and send you the midi files to load up the sequences into your own DAW and set the patches to your liking.
Or if you think it is total junk or simply not what you are looking for I can just bugger off.
ArcaneInquisitor
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Posted : Apr 15, 2010 02:39
I know what I posted sounds like shit, but I hope you get the idea I am trying to get across.
wow man, thanks for your time and great advice! i really aprecciate it! and btw i liked your suggestion for the ending, i think that with some cool patches it could do the work and make an interesting and nice ending for the track! 8)
I really like the melody introduced around 1:24, but overall the track seems too stale and flat - it needs some more elements to drive the track forward and to give it a bit more atmosphere and width.
thanks for the feedback pr0fane, ill try to ad more psy to the track! thanks!
ArcaneInquisitor
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Posted : Apr 17, 2010 01:31
Well, if you're still interested I have elaborated on my suggestion. This is a bit better idea of what I was saying.
At the end I pretty much move into a completely different song of some kind of cheezy trance style. But that's just the way it happened, what can i say.
I guess I have nearly moved into a completely different song, I might just go my own way. But yeah, that's what I have to say.
