daark
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Posted : Jul 24, 2011 06:24
nice nice tune ...
Some lowcuts, bring the snare more up. There are stops in hihats that is not good (and overall look for wierd tiny stops) make the track more fluid. Work more on the hihats i think you need to bring them down a bit.
Cardinals Cartel
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Posted : Jul 24, 2011 16:34
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On 2011-07-24 01:43, Vermeee wrote:
if u need inspiration smoke a joint and take a wlk in the woods
Think an cemetery will help much better ..
For the track .. Didt like the laugh in your intro - Imo sound un natural in there , Couldt find any connection , Also try fill the intro more - This is the begining of an story So .. Somthing have to be there to take us in and not just a sound there to say 'Hey i made an intro' This is not enough when its become to full track . You have an hard mix work to do here . So intro stop .. Bass kik (Need more work - Compressore + Heavy machines on) get in nice , But why those noisy sounds up there keeping bother (And same) For 30 sec' , Man .. This sound cant be the issue of the track , You cant base on this sound alon there , Also put him in the backround , Less bark better sound . Try create more harmony . Im not a big fan of an internet talking pads but this is your music - Just think that if you want to be creative so fill the breaks with more elements , Effects and tools in . 02:43 where the bass and kik .. ? Take and bring them from the background and let them be alive , Real and here . More loops , More atmos and leads but first of all work on the mix , Eq and all the global sound .
Keep it up ..
Vermeee
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Posted : Jul 25, 2011 22:25
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On 2011-07-24 16:34, Cardinals Cartel wrote:
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On 2011-07-24 01:43, Vermeee wrote:
if u need inspiration smoke a joint and take a wlk in the woods
Also try fill the intro more - This is the begining of an story So .. Somthing have to be there to take us in and not just a sound there to say 'Hey i made an intro' This is not enough when its become to full track.
I hate stories and i hate looong boring atmospheric intros too.. i like it straight on.
and i hate looong boring atmospheric intros too.. i like it straight on.