jeeboomba
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Posted : May 13, 2014 10:23:41
wassup folks, all good this time? so i got here the track i work this month.. i like how its coming out.. and wanted to chk wht you guys think.. this is not the final bounce here.. so all words will be considered for my last sitting..
rumble mumble fumble stumble
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vipal
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Posted : May 13, 2014 21:28
i like it, maybe try to put a bit of a hook at one point, dont know for sure you will have to try.
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jeeboomba
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Posted : May 13, 2014 23:29
what do u mean by that man? like a break or something? i would say that this work can take more of mixing and proper arrangement... these i will be working on for my next one.. u know like tricky ways to switch the flow and connect one part with the other and stuff like that.. about mixing - ever learning.. fine tuning.. cheers
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Rework
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Posted : May 15, 2014 14:52
vipal
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Posted : May 16, 2014 10:55
i mean a lead that stands a bit more out and connects the different parts of the track. not a break.
f.e.: the leadsound from 1:30 is now question and answer. just do there the question and do the answer at the end of the track (and a bit of this game in between).
in case you like more melodic feel of the track. but you have to try these kind of things if it fits with your ears.
jeeboomba
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Posted : May 16, 2014 15:15
hmm cool man i think i get it.. like a theme for the track maybe? will think about this.. thnx for the words u guys.. cheers
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Posted : May 18, 2014 10:22
the kick and bass wasnt my cup of tea but i enjoyed the rest of it, fun sounds doing fun things http://soundcloud.com/korvador
