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Phasmatix81
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Posted : Apr 16, 2007 20:46
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Hallo evrybody out there,
is there anybody who wants to lisen to my latest track? its smooth slow! you can download and hear the track here:
http://www.speedyshare.com/230646908.html Track: this is who we are! By: Phasmatix
Thanks for feed back!!!! Have a nice day!
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Phasmatix81
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Posted : Apr 17, 2007 16:45
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isen´t there anybody who wants to give me som feedback or criticism? i know that my work is not such good but i need feedback and criticism to develop myself! so please take time and give me some words! Thank you all!!! |
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Ghost Host
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Posted : Apr 17, 2007 21:03
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well this style is not my cup of tea, but your kick is really too loud...try to find sweet point that not disturb your ears...leave track playin on middle volume and go another room, focus your self on what u hear exactly, it's have to be harmony on your tune... kick, bass, leads, hats...and so on u have to hear clear and all instruments have to be support each other, but not shouting who is louder...
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Phasmatix81
IsraTrance Junior Member
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Posted : Apr 17, 2007 22:47
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Thank you witch!!! yes you are right! i know that my tunes and tracks are banally at this time! but its going better and better and if more peopel like you told me something and give criticism to me! it have to go better and i can learn something! thanks a lot! i will turn the voleums lower und try to attach the singel tracks to one hand in hand playing sound! i think i try it with filter on each track and with one main filter..hmm i have to check this...i hope it is works....could i send a later version of this track to you, in a few days?
Thanxs a lot
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