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Need Critique on Intro and Kick and Bass
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kabbalisticvillage
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Posted : Feb 6, 2012 00:26:13
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Gedankenexperiment
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Posted : Feb 6, 2012 01:05
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yes, like the intro...maybe some wind noise in the background would make it sound fuller...kick is good too, bass may needs a little more...bass:) ...just my opinion:)
cheers
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psyviz
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Posted : Feb 7, 2012 22:08
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Not bad, sounds intrestiing .... the intro defenitly needs more work as you come towards the kick smalll sweep or build up will help maybe a drum roll or small break 1 bar perhaps keep it up 
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TuneUnit
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Posted : Feb 8, 2012 01:43
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you got some nice ideas there! just keep working on it and it will be a nice tune
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aje
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Posted : Feb 8, 2012 12:43
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I really like the the bassline, it is very upbeat and happy, and K/B combo develops a nice drive. It just needs to be more present in the mix, make the K/B louder. And the kick has some weird artefact or clicking that somehow bothers me.
But I think out of that K/B combo you can make a great sunday afternoon track, I would just go easy on those guitars, that`s a little too much cliche Ibiza sound. Except maybe you want to make an Ibiza tune, then you are on the right track!
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