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Need a review on my track
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Caqueira
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Posted : Dec 1, 2004 16:10
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Hi guys,
would you mind listening to a track of mine and giving me a feedback?
it´s a dark progressive, and I need to now if I need more elements on the drums, more FX, or some changes in mastering or mixing, any critics will be appreciated.
here´s the link for downloading it:
http://s19.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=95C477804B0C9E2D3CCDBA4237F2E49D
thanks a lot to you all.
cheers!
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isaah
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Posted : Dec 2, 2004 10:27
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your site is not available... please do it as early as possible |
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Caqueira
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Posted : Dec 2, 2004 15:47
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ganjagil
IsraTrance Junior Member
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Posted : Dec 2, 2004 16:05
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Hi there mate you have quite some good work but have somethings to tell ya, first of all the groove the sound of kick and bass sound old, the fx sound good but also all through the track it is quite musically simple you have only one melody and the sound of it is not so good also and the track remains stand still. My opinion is that you need to work on the sounds and on the groove I mean just compare it to nowadays music and you’ll know! Apart from this is just my humble true opinion I wish you good luck in your work!
Bom
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MARGHERITA
Master Margherita
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Posted : Dec 2, 2004 16:55
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Cool, i like the track
Sorry ganjagil, i like the kick&bass sound (hold? is ok), your track (caquiera) remember a promo from arketype, minimal & slow tempos.
Maybe is too much slow tempo, try more fast (138/140/142)
With this speed i think your groove kick&bass is better
cool man! 
peace
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Caqueira
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Posted : Dec 2, 2004 19:02
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thanks a lot for the feedback guys!!!
ganjagil, you are right, those sound old because I like to sinthesize every single sound of my track, and I am not very good at it right now, going to work on that. And about the groove, it´s been kinda hard, it´s my first track on Logic and I still need to learn more of the software.
margherita, I,m glad you like it, I will try t vary the speed to see the results, the 133,3 bpm was chosed by purpose, intended to be really slow and hipnotic, but i will do some experiments.
thanks a lot guys, keep ´em coming!
boom!
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