nebula nova
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Posted : Jan 10, 2014 15:33:51
my latest.. took way too long, and at this point Im kind of oversaturated.. no idea if this is good or bad, or what I originally intended.. some oldschoolvibe, I guess.. turning 16th notess galore..anyway, here it is..
nebula nova
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Posted : Jan 14, 2014 16:21
gone through the usual chain of remixes..
still quite unsure.. opinions still welcome.
jeeboomba
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Posted : Jan 15, 2014 01:02
bass arrangement is weird and it works.. sounds are cool.. after that first break, u can bring in the snare bit more to the front for the groove factor.. barely audible now... really like the sounds developing later before the second break.. make use more of risers to mark transition.. will give u better results with the flow.. a 'main' melody line at around 6.24 would seal things.. like u knw on top of what is right now.. last part is nice bass.. imo u can bring out more perc flows and try more percs.. like some toms.. too much free space in the mid and lower mid part of the spectrum.. hope this helped or something.. cheers man...
re-arrange what you thought was real
nebula nova
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Posted : Jan 17, 2014 20:35
thanks! will need some time, though.
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nebula nova
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Posted : Jan 18, 2014 18:31
.. could not resist.. more percussion, some rising noises for emphasizing and a melody at 6: 24 ( cheated, though, just reversed some of the other melodies )added..thanks!
