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Nebula Nova -Density Addict
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nebula nova
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Posted : Aug 13, 2013 03:40:13
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more inspiredby psychedelic Rock ala Litmus or Farflung than "real" trance, and with only four minutes left to my soundcloud accound, I really had to get to the point fast. Feel free to tell me if I am totally out of place.
https://soundcloud.com/nebulanova/density-addict |
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smoker
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Posted : Aug 13, 2013 14:15
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nice intro but you have a lot problems in you're track
when the bassline is coming ,the sound start eating each other.
i mean,it's sounds like you put kick and bassline on the same notes same with everything on your track
you should fix you're track becuase you can't understand the story of you're track
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nebula nova
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Posted : Aug 13, 2013 21:09
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you are right, of course; tried to separate bassdrum and bass a little bit more, its just much harder when the bass is walking all over the place; also, I tend to fall in love with all the chaos and tend to be disappointed when everything is finally cleanded up; anyway, new version up now. Thanks! |
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B-recluse
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Posted : Aug 13, 2013 21:23
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wow bro smoker is right ! to be honest i don't get the feeling here ! very nerotic its sounds your break beats are far from in tune and its a soup of a mess !and to hurry a track never works ! trance or no trance result is bad ! hope you come with a better version ! good luck and namaste |
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nebula nova
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Posted : Aug 13, 2013 22:37
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next version up.. what do you think? |
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nebula nova
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Posted : Aug 21, 2013 13:22
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.. and another one.. I know I shouldnt post first drafts, but on the other Hand Feedback really helps.. link should still work |
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smoker
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Posted : Aug 22, 2013 01:19
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hey mate
the track is improved but again the baseline is to fast
try to put bass on 4 notes
kick then bass kick then bass kick then bass kick then bass
but track is improved
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