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Narcosia - New Psytrance Artist - Please Review my tracks
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Narcosia
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Posted : Oct 17, 2002 10:33
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Hi everyone,
After listening to psytrance for the past 3 years I have just started making some psychedelic trance of my own. I would really like some comments, suggestions, and criticism.
Go to www.mp3.com.au/Narcosia and download my first two tracks and let me know what you think.
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I.D.a.N
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Posted : Oct 18, 2002 23:29
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Your second track is weird in a good way. |
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Narcosia
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Posted : Oct 19, 2002 01:49
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Thanks, weird can be good.
EVERYBODY!!! Please let me know what you think. I need your suggestions so I can make my tracks better and better.
The worlds biggest psytrance fans are HERE!! I respect all your opinions, so give em' to me!!
Love ya's
Joey jo jo |
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punctum_nike
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Posted : Oct 19, 2002 18:09
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Hey m8..... 
I must say, its not excactly my style... So i cant say wether its good or bad. But you have a nice sound...
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dekel
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Posted : Oct 24, 2002 19:12
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hi man
well i heard both of your treks and i have to say that it sounds like you sure know what you are doing...
thats not my style but you have some realy nice parts and a lot of parts which sounds like you realy worked with them
anyway you sound good man keep up your work
"just when i was about to go out, they pulled me back in..." |
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Kitnam
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Posted : Oct 25, 2002 19:55
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i feel like this is some longe-psy-electronica-style
ur mind is very open this time and i guess u like
to experience trought the world of sound-programming but with a concret message in the trax. so innovation is not the problem
but the mix could be more deep (delay, reverb..
highcuts, lowcuts) and some more groove with
percussions and the loops getting more dymamic
for now.. i wait for the next trax
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WeIrD@LcHeMy
Weird Alchemy
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Posted : Oct 27, 2002 16:39
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Hello Narcosia and greets to AU.
Your sound is really good
Drummm - Nice morning track,nice vocals! (i didnt like so much that arpeggiated sequence,its too long)
Taiyo - Exellent track guys...keep it UP!!
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I am the FUNK!
john
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Reece
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Posted : Oct 28, 2002 03:08
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hey Joeyyyyy!
nice to see u here mate 
love ya work, u have heaps of potential, so just keep going!
u have a great sound and i look forward to hearing u progress.
(did u get your thesis finished?, come visit me soon!)
BooooMz!
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inkubator
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Posted : Nov 22, 2002 04:00
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...nice stuff, i really liked, psy on another trip...
just gimme more of the same. its just a test! |
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Foka
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Posted : Nov 22, 2002 13:47
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I listen to both tracks and here what i think of them:
Drummm - I think this is your oldest track right? If not, it's easy to find old school weird psy influences on it and the arpegio all the track long make me a bit tierd of it.
Taiyo - Really nice track inovation is prensent here for sure these is an original track lots of organic elements present as native australian instruments.
Keep the Nice work. |
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Kaz
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Posted : Nov 22, 2002 15:12
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Sounds very interesting. Drummm is nice and relaxing, well built - but I'd go for something more surprising, solid soundwork - could be tweaked and improved though - many elements seem random. Volumes are not always accurate. Get's pretty boring near the end - there's no real change in atmosphere the entire track.
Taiyo - I loved the opening, deep and spooky, great didj and tabla samples. Deeo and enviromental, from beginning to end - but again, the atmosphere just doesn't change much. The track gets messy near the middle/end parts of it.
Production could be improved, soundwork is very creative but not proffesional - the percussion and atmosphere work are very linear in both tracks. Very creative and original ideas, I liked them a lot... keep working and you'll definately go places with your music.
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Thor
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Posted : Nov 22, 2002 16:42
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heyy interesting sound bro !! I like the style of the track !! Love Drumms !! Keep work on it, and kill the dancefloor !
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PrincezzzToma
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Posted : Nov 24, 2002 07:50
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Taiyo is so great!! I like this style so much. Very nice! I'd like to hear some more of you... so if you make anything new, let me know!
And i'm just wondering, on the 3rd minute are you saying something in particular? or it's just nothing? if you say something, what exactly? and what language? (sorry for stupidity, but i think, this is no language  ). And how do you call this style of music, btw?
Drumm is nice too, but i still like the first one more.
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BrainStorm
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Posted : Nov 25, 2002 11:45
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hey, nice sound u got
"drummmm" - nice piece of art, great tablas and vocals
though i'd remove a few patterns
besides.. sounded not THAT psychedelic to me
what its length? maybe making it a bit shorter would have some sense..
"taiyo" - i liked it more.. maybe a bit long intro, but yet pretty nice indian chants & tablas
great tempo
i think there must be more then 1 synth line through all the the track, even if its killer line
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im with Kaz about the atmos not changing in both tracks
but still pretty nice for the beginning
keep it up - u may have a big future
if its not confidential - what software r u making music with?
BrainStorm
http://www.mp3.com/whoracle
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