Yellow Warrior
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Posted : Nov 4, 2005 17:09
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Hey man Pavaka!
I'm sorry but i don't like the beginning boss. Its just a bit putting off. Also, it seems i've heard those sounds somewhere before on your tracks. Maybe they are just old, i don't know.
At about 2mins, it starts to get better, it takes off nicely at 3 something again, Ah, now its interesting!  but you need to put more percussion man.
I liked the atmospeheres, good work and some decent breaks. The leads are nice but like i said the sounds are a bit old i think.
Overall good track but truthfully i liked some of your previous work better.
I think you need to work some more. Something is missing. I think you need more Fx and some more atmospheres. Though i liked the ones in there, they are used a bit overused. Don't be lazy, make some more! heheh... and definitely more percussion. Your synth work on the leads also need more effort.
Anyway, keep working man, you'll get there! 
Best Wishes,
Bharath.
  Rather than feeling that you're about to have the rug pulled from under you, let me teach you how to dance on a flying carpet |
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