makus
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Posted : Jan 4, 2012 10:23
stop using presets. shame! if you are able to make a pretty good track, why can't you create such an easy arp as you took from Sylenth? lazyness? it kills it all. i can't even put a smile after this.
besides that this is a good track, i like it. mix is balanced (though not perfect yet, to my ear), it tells a story, has lots of melodic content.
you build it more like full on, not progressive. this is totally up to you in general, but to my ear your last (third) part of the track lacks drive, comparing to previous parts. in fact the first part is the best. i would put it in the end. this way you gonna keep the track developing all the time.
maybe think of creating a track with only one break the middle (this is not critics, just a suggestion). good luck man
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yotedj
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Posted : Jan 4, 2012 15:32
thank's makus!!this can be an help for me, anyway, y don't use arp....i write the notes in every synth, and process the presets!!!! http://soundcloud.com/acid-moon
makus
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Posted : Jan 4, 2012 16:52
naretir
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Posted : Jan 4, 2012 18:50
cool tune! thumbs up Ohh yeah. fiddle and boom. Ableton addict :)
Been here since October 14, 2008.
Icetoon
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Posted : Jan 4, 2012 21:04
I dono, I thought this was super decent and it's not like most party-goers know what a preset is anyway
Djones
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Posted : Jan 4, 2012 22:07
I didn't notice the Sylenth preset And overall I was pleasantly surprised with the quality of your track, didn't except too much for just your second try.
Although I don't know how many fullon tracks you might have made thus far
yotedj
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Posted : Jan 5, 2012 00:03
makus,you produce , you know better than me that sometimes you can make sounds similars to others.... or not??? maybe y can be a little more original....this, of course!! hehehe
DJones, i make fullon from some years, but progressive in this period make me interested very much!!!
here you can listten my works:
http://soundcloud.com/acid-moonhttp://soundcloud.com/acid-moon
makus
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Posted : Jan 5, 2012 01:05
The preset name is "ARP PowerRiff"
Here it is:
But if you say that you made it yourself and it accidentally happened to be the same as in Sylenth preset folder, then yes, go with it www.overdreamstudio.com
yotedj
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Posted : Jan 5, 2012 13:20
thank's!!!
