jeeboomba
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Posted : Mar 22, 2013 06:47:55
namaste
so i have found myself in kind of a block lately with no new ideas emerging. so have started learning new stuff and it would REALLY be kik ass if someone cud point out which areas to concentrate on.. or any words of advice!
here's my latest work
hoping to hear some of your words... thanks all... re-arrange what you thought was real
jeeboomba
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Posted : Mar 24, 2013 09:44
man its so hard to get feedback these days.. but i knw its gud thing we all trying to experiment.. well heres this post hoping someone will listen.. cheers all, the best.. peace
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Grevinsky
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Posted : Mar 25, 2013 17:02
Hey dude.
Yeah sometimes those periods come, im in one myself.
For sure is hard to get feedback, too many only want to get and not ready to give .
Nice vibe, The kick and base is not so powerful at the moment tho.
I really like your work with the percussions in the start.
1.20 it feels abit like it´s coming down or a new section is coming, that becomes little confusing since it has just begun.
Interessting key change 1.40, but too me it´s too soon. You could build the first chapter a little longer, and then introduce it.
Nice at 1.57, but then again i think you should develope every section abit more and longer.
You got many nice idea trough´t the song, too many even i think.
What it lacks now is structure, the idea´s are there, but you loose energy, power and interests trough poor arrangement.
So i say work on your arrangement and structure, try to merge the parts of the track together.
jeeboomba
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Posted : Mar 26, 2013 16:22
ok so arrangement, need to sustain flow.. and conscious shifts.. check.. will surely keep in mind.. also tighten kik bas combo
and even i think i need to work more of higher mid and high freq sounds more.. will do
thanks a lot for your energies! peace!
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nebula nova
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Posted : Mar 27, 2013 10:47
now i clicked reply and it killed the track..up to minute three, was going to say the same, basically.. that murkyness makes for an interesting industrial touch, but its a little bit much probably, and the shifts seem a little bit random to me, but then i should talk.. its just damn hard to judge if you listened to a track for 150 times.. keep it up!
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