Ohmniologic
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Posted : Sep 3, 2011 13:55:21
Feedback is welcome!!!!:P thanks to alll
Nomad Moon
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Posted : Sep 3, 2011 15:14
You're getting good at it , i'm no dark expert but you could make some more bass variations in some parts just a four bar KBKB or some mid tones up and down so that i doesn't sound always the same, really liked the 2.25 break.
Ohmniologic
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Posted : Sep 3, 2011 18:56
Thanks my friend i dont see that break u talk its not on time u say....
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On 2011-09-03 15:14, Nomad Moon wrote:
You're getting good at it , i'm no dark expert but you could make some more bass variations in some parts just a four bar KBKB or some mid tones up and down so that i doesn't sound always the same, really liked the 2.25 break.
Nomad Moon
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Posted : Sep 4, 2011 03:37
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On 2011-09-03 18:56, Ohmniologic wrote:
Thanks my friend i dont see that break u talk its not on time u say....
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On 2011-09-03 15:14, Nomad Moon wrote:
You're getting good at it , i'm no dark expert but you could make some more bass variations in some parts just a four bar KBKB or some mid tones up and down so that i doesn't sound always the same, really liked the 2.25 break.
Sorry its 1.25
psyraal
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Posted : Sep 4, 2011 13:00
knocz
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Posted : Sep 4, 2011 18:25
Nice I think everything for a killer track is there, you just need more automation's and effects on the main track, like what happens from 3:18 forward.
I personally like to hear the bass vary a lot in this style, I'd most certainly go for a simple minor pentatonic progression in the end, to put a smile on people's faces.. Super Banana Sauce http://www.soundcloud.com/knocz
Bipolar
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Posted : Sep 5, 2011 06:01
I love fast tempo tracks, and this one is really nice. Cool bass, deep.
In$ane el rato
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Posted : Sep 5, 2011 14:35
i listen your track it's good i like you make noise i don't made i think if you work to have various bassline you can make a killer tracks (and if that will be mine more melody parts;) but that's not )
In$ane el rato
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Posted : Sep 5, 2011 14:41
what did you think of this one?
Ohmniologic
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Posted : Sep 5, 2011 18:13
Hello thanks bro, im working on that
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On 2011-09-04 18:25, knocz wrote:
Nice I think everything for a killer track is there, you just need more automation's and effects on the main track, like what happens from 3:18 forward.
I personally like to hear the bass vary a lot in this style, I'd most certainly go for a simple minor pentatonic progression in the end, to put a smile on people's faces..
Ohmniologic
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Posted : Sep 5, 2011 18:19
Very nice my friend!!!!but myabe with a shorty notes one the bass line and maybe another equing on Kbb....but its my opinion.....
, i'm no dark expert but you could make some more bass variations in some parts just a four bar KBKB or some mid tones up and down so that i doesn't sound always the same, really liked the 2.25 break. 
I think everything for a killer track is there, you just need more automation's and effects on the main track, like what happens from 3:18 forward.
