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my new track...reviews please
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dj atatri
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Posted : Jan 4, 2005 19:28
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hi there...
well firstly happy new year to you....u all i hope every one had great time
well i need help from you guys...
i always doubt myself with how good i m with music creating...
so i just finished my new track ...full on mrning
(LSD CREATIVITY 140 bpm )
it is fully computerised track no hardware
used ...at all well i used ADOBE AUDITION (software) for making da track ...
so i used lot of samples...from every where u name it some r even from tracks...
i stole da...
1.bassline from ASTRIX - SEX STYLE
2.break vocals - gringos - shift
3.vocals from gamma gobblins - gms remix
these r the main big samples i have used rest r not enough to mention...
now what i need is ur suggestion on my track...
n i need open heart suggestions if it is crap say it boldly.. if it is 2 out of 10 say it boldly... if it shit fucking crao say it boldly...i dont mind i rather like to work on my creativity ...
okay u need to judge me on two thing or rate me..
1. overall track
2. creativity
3. will u buy this for 10 bucks (ans in yes or no) n i m not SELLING anything just an idea to see how good or bad my tracks...
i have signed on sound click n the link is........(http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/djatatrimusic.htm )
i just started making music...so i m bit of inexperience but i belive in creativity not in experience if u dont fine by me i will improve n try other time k
boom frm dj atatri |
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Redlink
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Posted : Jan 5, 2005 12:22
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Redlink
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Posted : Jan 8, 2005 17:20
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hi!
your track lacks in variation and its boring! to much static! after 3 minutes u hear exactly the same things since the begining of the track! to make people dance u need movement and variation!
and where are the hats? i cant hear them!!
the leads sound like they dont are in the same tempo.
first of all my advice, i think you need to hear more music, dude! listen!
and be original, it will sound better!
Have a good time all the time! |
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