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My new progressive track,WIP
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jekvan
IsraTrance Full Member
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Posted : Jan 22, 2013 05:30:10
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aje
IsraTrance Full Member
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Posted : Jan 22, 2013 10:59
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I like this, reminds me of old Yahel kind of, especially the bouncy beat and the overall squishy feel of the sounds. And the intro is cool! And I like that it tells a story, theres always somthing to keep the listener interested, this sounds like a shitload of work. You really improved a lot since a I heard tracks by you (its been a while...)
That being said, the kick bass could use some more warmth and power in the lower frequencies, the whole mix seems too "high". And stop with the goddamn triplets!!! Its so overdone, it was cool for a while, now it seems no prog-track can do without (sorry, just a personal opinion here, hahaha).
Anyways, well done!
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klippel
Stereofeld
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Posted : Jan 22, 2013 11:21
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things i do not like:
- the intro with the train talk.. no need for that, does not connect to the rest. start from around 1:20 with the vocoded voice or what it is. would be a much better start!!
- the triplet part in the end, agree with aje
- the bass sounds to thin, more beef in the low end, make me shake my booty man!
things i like:
everything else really, great guitar, great sounds. sweet and detailed arrangement. great flow, vibe and atmosphere. deep and mind tingling. now go back and make it the killer track it can be 
this is quality music ;-)
http://www.ektoplazm.com/free-music/stereofeld-frequenzwechsel
"I've always been a believer in musical repetition to draw in the listener and make the music hypnotic. Another thing I believe in is repetition." Alan Parsons |
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