Jason (LyTe)
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Posted : May 25, 2002 12:31
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Great Kick, i love it.
bassline - u used a synth for it, which is fine, but you choice of sound is lacking. a bassline should be a)on a lower key and b) with a different sound, so it can push a beat to a certain level. the parts are written Ok, u just have to take it lower and switch the sound.
the dialogue breaks (3:30-3:42) are breaking your flow, as well as some other earlier dialouge breakes. great melodies, great percussions.
the sample is Ok, but the passage from and to it are not too smooth. work it out.
just change the bass' sound and stretch the structure's limit, and you got yourself a pounding full on tune.
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