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My heart is longing for feedback~

Oni Katsu
Li/fe

Started Topics : 101
Posts : 704
Posted : Nov 9, 2011 12:58:59

Hi my beloved ones <3
So i sat down here one night and my mind wouldn't let me fall asleep, so i sat up all night for... probably 8 hours
ONLY producing, mixing and arranging
without anything breaking my flow.

This is where i'm at

i'd say i'm midways to a proper track, but i want to know your opinions, to know iwether i'm on the right track (pun intended) or not.

Cheers and all~

http://soundcloud.com/li-fe

I said I like it dirty, not muddy.

knocz
Moderator

Started Topics : 40
Posts : 1151
Posted : Nov 9, 2011 15:50

Nice thing going on there

I'd like to hear more variation with the bass.. do you wan't to try lowering the bass a full octave in the beginning?

Also, i like that "quack" synth effect, but it should be more prominent, in the front.

Don't you wan't to make a super duper buildup frm 3:28 to 4:38?

Super Banana Sauce http://www.soundcloud.com/knocz

mosfat

Started Topics : 1
Posts : 14
Posted : Nov 9, 2011 17:40

sounds very nice, i must say your night went really productive, for me you're on the right track

keep it up

http://soundcloud.com/mosfat/

Galaxy Machine
IsraTrance Junior Member

Started Topics : 15
Posts : 170
Posted : Nov 10, 2011 12:35

Really great track man! Great production makes a very professional impression to me. Though to liek this trakc it misses something, something which sticks out?

SpaceAlpha - http://soundcloud.com/galaxy-studio

HallunX

Started Topics : 5
Posts : 34
Posted : Nov 11, 2011 21:38

Very nice ! I wish to be skilled like you

<----------------Noob here

psyraal
IsraTrance Full Member

Started Topics : 77
Posts : 768
Posted : Nov 11, 2011 22:08

Nice swingin', i just feel like those rises and downers are just a lil' bit too high in volume. Well, if you like 'em that way, you shouldn't change it.

EDIT: Forgot to mention, incredible flow man.

https://soundcloud.com/neervos

Oni Katsu
Li/fe

Started Topics : 101
Posts : 704
Posted : Nov 25, 2011 05:43

Hey guys! thank you all for your effort! giving me there great advices, i have tried as best as i can to complete every task, and tweak it to becoming better.

Are the voice samples i added, out of place? or is this just something the artist feels himself only?

anyway? hope you feel like listening to the improved version of the track!

enjooy!!

The link is updated

no reason to spam more links haha ~

http://soundcloud.com/li-fe

I said I like it dirty, not muddy.

Filthy Dragon
IsraTrance Junior Member

Started Topics : 10
Posts : 29
Posted : Nov 25, 2011 18:39

Nice!!!

Oni Katsu
Li/fe

Started Topics : 101
Posts : 704
Posted : Nov 26, 2011 04:30

Quote:

On 2011-11-25 18:39, Filthy Dragon wrote:
Nice!!!

If you say so? xD

Anyone know why the volume on this one is so much lower by default, than the past track i uploaded by the way? o__ o can't figure

http://soundcloud.com/li-fe

I said I like it dirty, not muddy.

Oni Katsu
Li/fe

Started Topics : 101
Posts : 704
Posted : Nov 28, 2011 11:25

Does this mean i'm flawless?
Cool, see ya guys when i'm going live in a month then

http://soundcloud.com/li-fe

I said I like it dirty, not muddy.

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