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my first upload 138 bpm
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xrust
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Posted : Dec 30, 2006 14:18
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orange
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Posted : Dec 30, 2006 15:54
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Nathan
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Posted : Dec 30, 2006 15:59
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I like the flow if this one. Many good moments. Nice atmosphere, you could make it fatter in some parts but still very good tack.
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orange
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Posted : Dec 30, 2006 17:59
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yeap the flow is nice!
although in some places the track tends to be kinda static!
ur kick and bass are not bad but they could be alot more fat and punchy as they get lost behind all the other elements as the track progresses and fills up!
i didnt like the exciting patch from u know what synth its to damn obvious u could do with something much better and strong!
u also luck some percussion/drum work to emphasis the groove more!
@ the end when u should lift the track u drop it and it doesnt climax!
some vocal fx at the end are clicking!
overall u sound very potential and im expecting great music from u in the future!
dont feel i dont like it if wasnt i would not write soo many things in the first place!
keep them coming!
orange
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xrust
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Posted : Dec 30, 2006 18:55
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hey thanx nathan and atropa,for shure this isnt finished track,i know about the klicks and tsiks.the problem is that this project is lost and cannot be more processed..ahhh nevermind the next will be better i hope 
ahh here is another link for the same track
http://www.mytempdir.com/1141641
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Sound Surgeon
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Posted : Dec 30, 2006 21:49
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heya xrust, well these are my two cents :
i would say the same as atropa did about kickbass combo, it should be stronger a little bit cuz when you have more layers it not hearable like it should be, plus eq things not to get on top of its low freqs.
Next one is that between 1:30-3:30 you barely have any progresssion there. I really like all of the sounds you have there but you should shorten that into 45-1:00 minute of time (at most). more synths or backpads could do the work too. i think you have similar problem later during the track, but in the beggining its really a big one. i really liked the melody after 5:00 and the way it develops, maybe some more soundworking on it and making a different VST patch there.
another thing which i personly dislike is those lazy begginings  kick and umtza umtza....but thats my taste
Imo kickbass is rox! nice sound there with good rolling effect!
i know you will improve in the next tracks, for sure! this one is a good work but you can make much better music! for sure. good luck
Misha
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diskOtek
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Posted : Dec 30, 2006 22:34
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hey xxxrust!
finally exposed hehe! 
nice track mate!all those sidesynths fit great!
cool snare!
i agree about the kickbass sayings,but also i think that what makes it sound kinda static is the bass..u cvould play more with it imo!
rest is said!
here's to the next one!
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psy#groover
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Posted : Jan 3, 2007 17:13
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hei its a nice track i am already conviced we gonna hear super things from mr. xrust in the near future! keep working m8 the future lies bright for u.
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xrust
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Posted : Jan 3, 2007 23:55
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hey psygroover thanxx man,there are more to come
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