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MY first tune on the net
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___Coloured_Dude
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Posted : Apr 15, 2002 10:25:51
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Hey guys...
Please go and check out my new track....
the first track that I've got on the net..
Hopefully more in the near future.
Go to www.kwik-kut.co.za/download.php
The track : ApsyDrop - PsySlip
The sound isn't near to being perfect...
but hey...
Please.... good and bad comments...
constructive.. comments...preferably..
are welcomed!
Peace!
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___Dopamin
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Posted : Apr 15, 2002 21:12:22
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Hey thats one twisted track.....!!
But im sad to say....your sound is far from perfection.....in my speakers it's all distroted and to be honest sound quality of the track is crap (with this i mean that everything is distorted).
Clean up the sound and post this again then i think you'll get some good reviews from some full-on people.
Mixing and recording is everything....if you have a good track but you'r recording an mixing sux then you have nothing at all.....:-D
Never give up keep on it and you'll progrees like we all have. I didn't know much about music creation when i started and my first recordings sucked big time....:-D
Just listen to ohter peoples recordings and compare with your's and if they are better then try to figure out the differences between your's and that other mix/recording.
You got talent for some crazy music for sure...:-D
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___ChillCrew
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Posted : Apr 15, 2002 21:17:17
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Ok, i agree with Dopamin here. your sound is distorted as hell. even when i tried EQing it on SF or winamp i had some serious trouble getting it to sound normal.
one more thing - your structure and sound work are also confused. you have some good melodic lines there, but your trying too much to be an innovative creator, that it goes awry. your build ups should have more velocity changes (the kick rolls etc.), and also try balancing your instruments. |
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___bagakid
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Posted : Apr 15, 2002 21:24:24
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you can never try hard enough to be an innovative creator
2 cents from purple ;) |
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___ChillCrew
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Posted : Apr 15, 2002 21:40:13
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perhaps i was missunderstood, he tried too hard to do somthing innovative. i never said it's a bad thingm i just say it can work against you. |
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___Adriaan
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Posted : Apr 16, 2002 09:27:49
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Thanks guys for all the comments..
I am totally aware about the whole distortion thingy... and the lack of clarity..
I will do that..
thank you for telling me exactly what you guys thought about the track.... I know it can be much better and I have cleaned it up much more...
I will post the newer cleaner version as soon as possible... then you guys can have a better listen.
For me.... I only started producing music since January.... and creativity is something that I like to explore regardless of what the result is...
I like to go as far as I can... with what I am thinking at that moment... when I'm writing...
But I think that you got it wrong that I had too many innovative ideas.....or that I was trying to be too innovative...
I do, however, on reflection, realize that I didn't mould all of these ideas effectively together and it sounds as if the song is in portions or breaks.. and not one solid.. moulding... unit.
Thanks for the comments guys!!
Peace!
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___ChillCrew
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Posted : Apr 16, 2002 10:23:14
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[quote] and creativity is something that I like to explore regardless of what the result is...[/quote]
addaboy!! |
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___yaniv
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Posted : Apr 16, 2002 13:55:25
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why? |
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___Dopamin
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Posted : Apr 16, 2002 18:51:12
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eeeeeeeeeeeeeehhhh....
YAT: Why?
what do you mean?? |
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