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TechnoFear
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Posted : Nov 16, 2005 02:18
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enwhysea
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Posted : Nov 16, 2005 02:38
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But why be an idiot and give out the isratrance url on irc channels... give just your mp3 link
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rübe und luki
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Posted : Nov 16, 2005 14:00
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Hi GROOT
hm, the bass needs more room. I guess the problem here is, that your bass is more a drone/pad than a short bass (not that easy). Therefore your bass and kick don't like each other that well. Perhaps you could try to use a sidechain-compressor, so you would be able to increase the volume of your bass without deranging the kick too much. Perhaps you could only boost the mid-frequencies of your bass a little.. 
Or you could try to shorten the Bass. Could sound interessting.
Also there is a Tick/Zip-Sound after every kick. I suppose this wasn't intentionally.. get rid of it.
I'am not so happy with your HiHat-Work. Try faster patterns, I'm pretty sure that would do your song a favour. Also the Claps after 2:10 aren't my cup of tea. I would try some shorter sounds and perhaps a little delay..
Is it me or do I hear some drop-outs here and there?
Keep at it.
best regards,
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Mike A
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Posted : Nov 16, 2005 16:54
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I'm with rübe und luki. Some more things I have in mind:
The bass sound itself could use some decay on it (it sounds like a big long bzzzz). The sweeping sound in the beginning isn't synced to the beat, makes it sound fucked up.
That airplane sound is way too strong. I'd get rid of it actually. Some more sounds are like that, too strong.
Some effects (such as reverb and delay, the basic things) could make it sound a lot more full. The claps sound offbeat, try to fix it maybe.
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Fragletrollet
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Posted : Nov 16, 2005 20:40
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yeah alot of the elements sound offbeat, and sometimes its like the track is like a skipping cd-track... small glips if you know what I mean... sounds like some error occurred under rendering...
Anyways! Get thos things on-beat  |
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TechnoFear
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Posted : Nov 21, 2005 22:52
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thnx guys, i just learning....
 Plastik #2 @ Barzilay - 27.11 - With Peter Didjital (Sweden), Ido Ophir, Huda G and TechnoFear... more info: drgarry@gmail.com |
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rica
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Posted : Nov 22, 2005 02:42
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On 2005-11-16 02:38, enwhysea wrote:
But why be an idiot and give out the isratrance url on irc channels... give just your mp3 link
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what this unnecessarely rude or am i missing something?
Bhavatu sabba mangalam |
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