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my first track

talolard
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Posted : Dec 6, 2002 22:32
constructive criticism woth an emphasis on constructive

http://ambrosia.tv/content/music/TrackPage.asp?TrackID=7650
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Gilad Refael
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Posted : Dec 7, 2002 00:49
http://216.130.169.95/{6C6385BC-EF81-4497-9EFF-8F5587A1936C}/3384/mother.mp3           REHAB is for quitters
BrainStorm
IsraTrance Junior Member

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Posted : Dec 7, 2002 19:20

hey
hard to review.. too much things are going wrong :*)

Waveman
Psionyx

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Posted : Dec 13, 2002 22:13
It's interesting, but trance it ain't... more like some kind of weird experimental EBM track from the 80's

It gets better around 2/3 of the way through where the cheesy synth bassline is dropped and the percussion gets heavier. Stick with this and skip the weird baby samples, bass synth, and eastern instruments and the track would be WAY better.

My advice would be to go listen to more trance and you'll know why this doesn't fit.

          -=Psionyx=-
"We make you feel strange."
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