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My First Track
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pipebruno
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Posted : Aug 31, 2005 07:24
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godess on roll
IsraTrance Junior Member
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Posted : Aug 31, 2005 17:33
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ur track is not playing try using some other site
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pipebruno
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Posted : Aug 31, 2005 21:04
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pipebruno
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Posted : Aug 31, 2005 21:17
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TuK
TuK
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Posted : Sep 1, 2005 11:02
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hey pipedruno,
for a first track its o.k., you have to work on you production, your bass and kick are very thin, try to get a better kick sample and make you bass with more low end. listen to released tracks and try comparing, in the "equipment and music creation"
area there are a lot of threads about this and you can also find there good kick samples (use the search-its very useful)
about the track itself ,its pretty monotonic try adding melodies and breaks to make it more interesting.
dont get offended or anything my first track was alot worse nobody sounds good in the begining
its takes alot of time, so be patient and keep on working your next track will be alot better!!!!!! |
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pipebruno
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Posted : Sep 1, 2005 16:02
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thanks for your explanation and sincerity DJ Tuk, i'll try to make better in my next track and modify my bass, kick and put more melody.
Thanx. |
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