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My first track

daHas


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Posted : May 25, 2005 19:34
Hello everybody out there, my name is Martin I´m from Germany. I did my first trip to Goa in January, so this was my first contact with PsyTrance and the culture around it. I loved the music, everything, and decided to make such a song on my own.

You can imagine that a newbie like me needed a lot of tricks to learn - I found everything in this forum. Thank you for this!

So I hope you like the song. It´s yours, I was just the tool ;-)

http://www.internet-works.de/3rd_Eye.mp3

P.S. Sorry if this the wrong place to post a song, I´m new ;-)
VertigOA
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Posted : May 25, 2005 21:17
Wow great first track man. Like it a lot.           no sig
Meta-Morphosis
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Posted : May 26, 2005 19:34
... Nice into to the track!!will give a full feedback after i hear the whole !!!!            “What we need is the development of the Inner Spiritual man, the unique individual, whose treasure is hidden in the symbols of our mythological tradition and in man’s unconscious psych.” - CJ Jung
Freeflow
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Posted : May 28, 2005 00:06
Very nice track! layed back, i like the question- answer motif...

you really got the Miraculix feeling over it!
it has "Stop them" written all over it

hehe! nice job




Freeflow
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Posted : May 28, 2005 00:52
hehe sorry for over-exaggerating about the miraculix thing...

but still i noticed some similarities..

after comparing the tracks i noticed that there are miles between them...


anyway good track...
daHas


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Posted : May 28, 2005 01:56
Thx for the feedback! You really like it? Unbelievable

I just don´t understand the last post with the Miraculix thing. What does it mean, Miraculix thing? Did I copied someone by accident?

Hoenstly there are many nice tracks that I would like to copy sounds. But I have no clue how they make this awesome sounds - I can only make my own (at least I try to).

Thx again!
Freeflow
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Posted : May 28, 2005 02:54
not copy, but it sounds as you got some inspiration from miraculix...

but saying that is has "Stop Them" written all over it was a hefty exaggeration.. it was that, that i was sorry for saying cause its not true...

your track stands on its own!

and yes i really like it! its a smart track!
could use some more surprises on the way, but thats something to think about for the next track.. also i miss more variation in the end... could be anything, you choose, but something...
also im not sure about the climax...

from 5:24 you could have had some surprising sound that leads into the end... im thinking something psychedelic... or some portamento thingy...

im too tired now...
good night and keep on tweaking you got some talent... make sure you feed your psychedelic vein and mix it with that melodic touch that you have and it will be crazy!!

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