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My first track
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GEM_37
Cold Project
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Posted : Sep 18, 2003 15:42
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Hi guys this is my first track .. please could anyone whos interested have a listen and give me some feedback.... Pls bear in mind that i am new at this.
http://www.rudi.za.net/test/deep.zip.
any feedback welcome
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GEM_37
Cold Project
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Posted : Sep 19, 2003 11:05
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sorry guys made a mistake.
http://www.rudi.za.net/test/deep.zip
laters and the track is a bit muddy at the moment and its not finished yet.
the sound is also not typically south african.
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psilocybe
IsraTrance Junior Member
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Posted : Sep 25, 2003 13:01
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hey well i think its sounding good (over the hi-fi)....carry on and just believe in urself...
but what does my opinion matter anyway hey my inie... |
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GEM_37
Cold Project
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Posted : Sep 26, 2003 11:05
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thnx psilocybe.. i appreciate the support love and ecouragement i receive form you ... INI |
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Mike A
Subra
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Posted : Sep 27, 2003 15:42
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Sounds good? Not at all.
There is almost no mid-range in it. Bass (not kick) is too low.
Percussions lack dynamics, change the velocity of each note.
The entire track is quite boring, nothing happens in it. Sounds like a kick and some percussions to me. And there's this annoying sound with chorus on it. Get rid of it.
This definitely sounds like a first track. Try working some more before publishing your material.
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GEM_37
Cold Project
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Posted : Sep 29, 2003 15:56
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Thx ...
the only thing is i wont be working on the track any more as there was a small miss hap on the PC and i lost all the data for it..
i have started working on something new but i will take ur advice.
thx
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