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My First Track!

fishe
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Posted : Jun 22, 2002 17:09
This is my first trance
track...

http://www.ambrosia.org.il/content/artists/TrackPage.asp?TrackID=5300
PsyTom
IsraTrance Junior Member

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Posted : Jun 24, 2002 01:42
Link's not working here...
Mike A
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Posted : Jun 24, 2002 10:30
Well, this track is really really bad.
First of all, the bass is very annoying and painful. The track itself doesn't evolve and doesn't progress. It just stays the same thing. Haven't you heard of percussion? Having only hi-hats won't get you anywhere. Again, same parts are repeating throughout the entire track. You need to change something... Not remove a "melody" and add some chh's.
The kick drum was very nice, I liked it.
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