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My first "serious" track...please, reply!
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psychowave
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Posted : Mar 18, 2007 04:38
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Hello all!
Firstly sorry a bad english I´m brazilian...
I´m a guitar player, and now I´m trying to compose and produce my tracks...
I are working on a track called "Enchancing" and this is my last job(on my my space profile, you can see my 2 tracks produced before the "Enchancing") ...And on this track I are finding a regular sound...walking to a good sound...but I need feedbacks to sure If I are right...
I produce all elements of tracks on Ableton Live using a some plugins, writing note by note in all midi tracks, working with SC compression, well, all made by me...
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www.myspace.com/psychowave |
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splinter
Splinter / Kode Six
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Posted : Mar 18, 2007 08:00
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you gotta work your stuff alot man...you should use a different kick and a different bass
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Ned Flanders
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Posted : Mar 18, 2007 10:41
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I agree with the kick, need more punch, but i like the bass and the rest. good work, even its not my style. what did you use for the bassline?
This is a track , that i produced, i used trilogy for bass, what do you say about?
http://www.megaupload.com/de/?d=GG8WIZDC |
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psychowave
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Posted : Mar 18, 2007 14:54
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Well!
Thanks for replies...
splinter:
"you gotta work stuff a lot"...hummm...don´t understand well...can tell more about that?
flanders:
I´m using Muon Tau 2 for bass...I´m trying to use a Trilogy too...thanks for tip...
I can´t download the file...the limit to my country is over...hehe I will try listen other time...
and for all, What is the genre of this track? Trance??
Thanks!
Natan
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Ned Flanders
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Posted : Mar 18, 2007 18:17
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Well i would say: classical psytrance |
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splinter
Splinter / Kode Six
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Posted : Mar 18, 2007 21:32
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On 2007-03-18 14:54, psychowave wrote:
Well!
Thanks for replies...
splinter:
"you gotta work stuff a lot"...hummm...don´t understand well...can tell more about that?
flanders:
I´m using Muon Tau 2 for bass...I´m trying to use a Trilogy too...thanks for tip...
I can´t download the file...the limit to my country is over...hehe I will try listen other time...
and for all, What is the genre of this track? Trance??
Thanks!
Natan
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hey,
well you got two choices ,you could eq ,but this kick and bass needs alot alot of eq, or you could make another bass and find a better kick , anyways good sound will come with time , i honestly think you should find a better kick, and make another bass
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galactic monkey
Galactic Monkey
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Posted : Mar 21, 2007 12:38
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Karash
Karash
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Posted : Mar 21, 2007 15:19
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Hmmm;;; I think there is not enough sub in the bass...it's like the frequencies between 0hz to 200Hz has been cut...Try to pump these frequencies with EQ in order to get the vibration from the sub bass...If you have also Wave effect, you can put an RBass on the kick and the bass...That will separate the high frequencies from the low frequencies =_=
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xaBBu
xaBBu
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Posted : Mar 21, 2007 22:46
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Hi there, listening as I am writing:
Kick and bass needs sidechain compression. EQ your kick so there is not too much content in mids (250 - 300Hz). Also Bassline needs more punch, try to level kick and bassline so they give a good foundation to the track. Kick needs more high frequ (try putting your highcut around 2000 - 3000 Hz with maybe a little q). Synths need width and panning. Sub of kick and bassline need to "melt" together, the woof sounds wrong.
What sequencer are you using? All sounds need more crispinees in high frequencies. They dont "cut".
Percussion is not really my type of taste... they sound like a from from a bad beatbox ... get good samples and add compression / eq.
Try to think in "frequency spaces" when eqing. sounds in your mixdown get eaten by other stuff.
i like the melos and piano in "breaker"... not really too fast a track, but nice. this mixdown is better than the other two. some more variation would help a lot ...
also let me add its hard to give these tips just by listening, but I hope they will help you just a bit.
Greetz,
xaBBu
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