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Posted : May 10, 2012 02:40:15
This is my first track that I have completed using cubase.. I have just recently begun to learn and use Cubase.. it's a dream finally being able to use it correct and trying different VST's and all that hope you like it and will give som feedback.. good as well as bad of course cheers
Equilizyme
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Posted : May 10, 2012 20:04
aloha amigo. cool intro! your bass needs to be loud relative to your kick. both sounds pretty good quality-wise tho. I think that leading into 3.00 you need a woosh or something, like a reversed reverb snare, or reversed crash, somethign to tell the listener that beat 1 is coming around again. helps with the flow. I think you break could benefit from a pad too maybe, more atmosphere. cuz the laugher is all atmosphery, pretty neat
good stuff!
as far as learning a new DAW, i would focus on learning all the native synths before getting VSTs. you will learn more and save CPU and i imo be more creative this way.
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Posted : May 11, 2012 15:49
Thanks alot for your feedback I'm glad you like it and I acutally thought about the reverse crash or something like that, and the atmossphere too, but then it just slipped my mind you know hehe
cheers amigo
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Posted : May 12, 2012 07:10
@bassmind using cubase , just first track, now keep going to live ableton later..!
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Posted : May 12, 2012 09:42
Interesting work , Good built , Simple , With an nice story and rhythm (And/So about the drive in - Some how you creat an cool 'Continuity'/'Consistence' (Sound into sound who bring the right follow , When i realy liket that - But .. This is not a 'Real' stream , This is just illusion of the other sound's around , When this is great , But i belive The real drive coming from the percussions and the hh loops , Your loops (Some places) Realy good .. But they are realy thin , Try bring more mass to this area too And/So/Then you'll see the difference's .
Can agree with mr. Equilizyme about the bass , Must be more 'Spacious' , Open , 'Here' and surround .
Cheers ..
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Posted : May 19, 2012 12:40
thanks alot for your replies nice to get some usefull feedback.. about the bass, i'm in close process of making just the right bassline (for me).. don't think you will be dissapointed cheers
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hope you like it and will give som feedback.. good as well as bad of course 
