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My brainwaves are out of phase

Terrafractyl
Terrafractyl

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Posted : Jun 19, 2008 15:30:56
Hello!

http://www.fileden.com/files/2008/6/18/1965857/uchunku.mp3

Heres a almost finished track I'm working on atm.
It still has work to be done on it but its getting there.
I hope someone likes it, and if you feel like telling me how it could be better, Please do!
peace
Felix
          all the dude ever wanted... was his rug back...
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Farbo
Farbo

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Posted : Jun 23, 2008 02:01
wow man! =0
amazing twilight vibe on the intro... that lead is wicked!
loving it! the bassline note stretching is awesome.
Overall everything is great! super clever arrangement of sounds!
killer style, really fresh and uplifting!
absolutly getting there!
no big suggestions... maybe you should add jumpy hats like you did with the snares at the begining, but its great as it already is!
looking forward for the finished version
peace           www.farboart.com
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squirm
IsraTrance Senior Member

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Posted : Jun 23, 2008 12:21
beautiful melodies in the intro. has a nice old school feel to it. much harder than your other releases i think in terms of that bassline. yeah i think farbo has it right, perhaps you could use a more jumpy arrangement for the highs. it could add a very hyper feel to the track if thats what you would like to go for. if you like you could even think about using the delay lama vst (im a sucker for that one ). also i think there is quite a bit of space to throw down some nice deep pads to give that melody that extra something. i reallly love the intense opera bit. also digging that chopped up fx with the vocoded voice. i think there might be more space for a crazy lead there somewhere but i guess that would come down to what your aiming for with the track. overall this is a very interesting track you have. would really like to see where you go with the final version
cheers           www.soundcloud.com/ishikawa
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Terrafractyl
Terrafractyl

Started Topics :  12
Posts :  85
Posted : Jun 24, 2008 15:45
Thanks Guys!

I finished it, but I can't help thinking its actually not quite as good now as it was.... I went a bit nuts with vocal samples, still not sure if they work or not.
Maybe its just me though.....
www.myspace.com/terrafractyl
Is where you'd find it.
Its now called 'The subconcious mind'
peace
Felix
          all the dude ever wanted... was his rug back...
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squirm
IsraTrance Senior Member

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Posted : Jun 24, 2008 22:58
finished track is pretty sweet. yeah the samples at points might be a bit much but i really the dig the way those random voice samples kick in ... ' hard core porn ' . bwahah. awesome stuff. now release it asap!           www.soundcloud.com/ishikawa
www.mechanikrecords.com
www.phonix-records.com
www.mixcloud.com/ishikawa/
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