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My 2nd attempt..!!!
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highpsybutterfly
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Posted : Sep 18, 2005 12:59
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FaceHead
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Posted : Sep 18, 2005 20:54
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ok lets see..... pad in begining is good id ditch the guitar blucking sound or whatever in the begining it sounds cheap nice kick and percs sounds better but that melody loop is taking away from the rest of the good stuff same with after the first break this synth is no good also maybe with some efx but i dont thinkk so then another drum loop comes in too loud. man this still needs alot the ending is real rough this bassy rumble made my ears upset the laughs are good but too frequent also the intro too long but your basis is real good your bass kick and percussion is real nice pads are all good but if i were you id strip out all the melodies and just start over on them your synths need more depth i put reverb and delay on almost all my synths even if its just the slightest amount try for less note change in them just more like they are sound efx the beginning just takes up too much of the song and its over all of a sudden more psychedelia the way your kick and bass sound it feels like there should be crazyness its just the melodies that dont work ok im being redundant if you want my two cents
"all new synths" "keep everything else and make the song come in sooner"
but dont get discouraged by the review my second song was an absolut mess youve got a good basis and thats the hardest part. so you are well on your way.
good luck
keep ur nose to the screen.
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highpsybutterfly
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Posted : Sep 18, 2005 21:19
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FaceHead
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Posted : Sep 18, 2005 21:43
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looking forward to hear it |
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