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Posted : May 13, 2012 14:25:03
Hi all, I've just finished my 1st track, is not final version cos i want add more fx but please take a listen to and give me some feedback. Thx.
Grevinsky
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Posted : May 13, 2012 23:01
You need to fix the base.
It is very messy, you should tune it with envelopes settings, try low decay.No attack, No sustain(or some, depending on the base u want), and almost none release.
The kick is almost unhearable also.
Your progresison comes abit sudden, perhaps try too make the transitions more smooth, too run it over a longer period.
You got some nice sounds and leads, but its not introduced so well, that kills the drive abit.
Nice melodies tho.
A break here and there could serve well also.
You have some nice things going on but you could develop it better.
very good considering that its your first song tho!!.
Good job.
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http://soundcloud.com/mechanical_species
HallunX
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Posted : May 14, 2012 01:01
@Grevinsky
Thank you for feedback, I take ur advices and I will rearrange track. Good luck for me
