Oni Katsu
Li/fe
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Posted : Jun 16, 2011 11:38:11
Heyo! this is the first time i actually poast my whole soundcloud playlist but, i'd like you to take a look still! tell me what you think, tell me what i should do better
The three newest songs are probably the best ones i guess.
psyraal
IsraTrance Full Member
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Posted : Jun 16, 2011 14:53
Well you know your game. Stable and empowered bassline, very melodic indeed.
The only reason why i couldn't listen to this tune twice in a row is because your tune sounds somewhat the same throughout the way, maybe i'm not using the best words, but its what i can say.
Obelizk
Amoeba
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Posted : Jun 16, 2011 19:55
Very cool vibe to this man.
The bass sound awesome too.
At like 4:21 it feels like it loses some power, like that area needs to be changed up.
And I liked the intro lead so much, I think you should use it somewhere while the bassline is going. You could even do like 4 bars of the intro lead, then go to some kick and bass for 4 bars of straight up kbbb, and do some back and forths with that. With the sounds you have, it would sound sick.
Also, your song could use more pads to fill in the space or more big reverbs/delays. I could see a song like this with lots of reverse pad sweeps in and out, or reverse strings sweeps.
You could even use some strong synth stabs when it's really getting built up near the end there.
That hit at 0:13 is awesome also btw ha.
It's cool cuz you have everything in place sounding good already, so you can just easily work with it.
