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Multiphase/pr0fane - "Kaleidoscope" - progressive trance preview
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pr0fane
Multiphase
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Posted : Dec 14, 2009 22:32:39
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orange
Fat Data
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Posted : Dec 15, 2009 17:12
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ok
its not bad again its ok... but just ok.
it misses the sense of story in a way.
you have alot of nice elements that fit nicely together but after a while in the rolling bassline part of the track its keeps going to... nowhere.
i like the deep feel you are giving ot it but you need more single hit/chord/fx parts to keep the thing flowing and moving ahead.
you fill all your acoustic space with very lush pads and atmos its a good thing for some parts of the track but in a full track you need more elements and between spaces to give it a more danceable/groovie feeling!
all in all you are in a good road and im pretty sure we will hear nice tunes from you profane!
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orange
Fat Data
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Posted : Dec 15, 2009 20:21
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pr0fane
Multiphase
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Posted : Dec 15, 2009 20:37
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No, you weren't too harsh - not at all! I think everyone can learn a great deal from good, constructive feedback, and I'm still very much in the beginning of a long learning-process. Actually; thanks for taking your time to give such extensive criticism. You know what you're talking about, so your feedback is greatly appreciated  DJ pr0fane (Iboga Records) | Multiphase
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dj chichke
Chichke
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Posted : Dec 17, 2009 01:52
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i agree with what orange said. the sound is good but it's lacks a story. |
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exkor
IsraTrance Junior Member
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Posted : Dec 17, 2009 03:38
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If you wanted to do progressive you need more variation. I look at progressive as a psytrance track taken down to ~130 bpm. So everthing a typical fullon track has a progressive track should have as well.
Try changeing the pad and the basslines, try introducing a silent break without anything and bringing a new mood.
Also I think it was a little quite to my ears but that's mastering part already.
enjoy
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orange
Fat Data
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Posted : Dec 22, 2009 15:03
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On 2009-12-17 03:38, exkor wrote:
If you wanted to do progressive you need more variation. I look at progressive as a psytrance track taken down to ~130 bpm. So everthing a typical fullon track has a progressive track should have as well.
Try changeing the pad and the basslines, try introducing a silent break without anything and bringing a new mood.
Also I think it was a little quite to my ears but that's mastering part already.
enjoy
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i dont really agree that prog and fullon have the same structure... most fullon tracks work on 2-3 melodic leads in a track with a usual breakdown that introduces the main melody/lead in an uplifting way.
prog gives to the listener many more sounds and soundscapes to follow and many times that dominant lead or that breakdown isnt the main theme of the track...
plus the arrangement/structure is usually alot different.
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Midnight Sun
ProtoDrive
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Posted : Dec 22, 2009 23:48
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I like it very much, I think that there IS NOT a way a track "should be", so I disagree with the point that "you missed this, change that.. etc.." Making linear ways of producing makes music sound all the same, boring! Everyone should produce its own way and we need variation in music, remember music is art, and art is constantly changin. Well thats my opinion and again I loved the track!
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