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Morning track
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Nanotek
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Posted : Mar 13, 2006 11:27
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Mark 87
IsraTrance Junior Member
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Posted : Mar 14, 2006 17:33
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hi bro ...
Nice Melodys Octave
keep it Up! |
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Freeflow
IsraTrance Full Member
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Posted : Mar 14, 2006 17:49
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i say, if you work on a more concret structure you can have a blasting track, right now it feels a little like a sketch..
If the track started at 01:52 it would feel more serious,
a intro to that, something in the line of the sound that starts at 03:34, for intro....
i really cant tell you how to do it, but i tell you my opinion, the track could feel more serious if you did a rework....
listen to the track, what does it tell you?
try to sort out the sounds that really dont add to the track..
better if you tell us your idea with the track!
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Nanotek
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Posted : Mar 14, 2006 21:23
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Hi mates, thanks for the comment mark 87 and your opinion new era scientist
I think you're right, if i remade it would be better, i'll do, the structure is not the best, hehe gonna try to do that, thanks man
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