Nomad Moon
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Posted : Dec 6, 2011 12:51
I really like your music, and its funny that your picture goes with your tunes, the best boom festival i went to and it felt like this song Tudo que é melhor e mais superior em mim saúda tudo que é melhor e mais alto em si
klippel
Stereofeld
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Posted : Dec 6, 2011 13:15
cheers mate
that boom was a wonderful festival indeed. good memories all the way..
http://www.ektoplazm.com/free-music/stereofeld-frequenzwechsel "I've always been a believer in musical repetition to draw in the listener and make the music hypnotic. Another thing I believe in is repetition." Alan Parsons
Cardinals Cartel
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Posted : Dec 6, 2011 14:08
Far away from my style (Like jupiter from earth) , Could find few storys in - The dreamish area (Till 02:03) When usualy i dont like when music repeating herself , Here (At this part) Could find it minimal , Simple but divine And thats whats draw me in .. (Sure you can add much more sounds at this part , You can do alot in this track This is all about what you want to get - Also need an better mix at this part to bring the bass be in the front because now its sound that high sounds control the track - Maybe add more power to the bass with some more machines/Effects . There right air and space inside to pool in more action to bring it be more real But this is all about taste and those) . The other part who come at 02:04 is more clubish - At this part i miss some more drive and surprise's . 04:06 Nice goa feeling But you should/Let the bass be more dominant (Out and here) When seems he is not leading and huging the track but hiding some where in the background .
Keep the good work m8 .. !
Wizack Twizack
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Posted : Dec 7, 2011 19:58
There are great sounds in this one! I like the calm feeling the track delivers. Nice morning vibes. Although it feels abit empty and in need of something else, u manage to keep that less is more thing, but imo its alittle bit to less perhaps. The lead melodie towards the end is mayby little to long and repetive. I've only listen with my laptop here and regarding the bass i think it fits the track pretty well. I dont know why some people only concentrate on the bass to be the biggest and strongest tool, its nice with bass not beeing the dominant thing in a track too imo.
supergroover
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Posted : Dec 7, 2011 21:25
Very nice track!
Few comments: I agree that it could do with some more sounds/ fx/ somethings.
I'd make the bass a little more noticable. Maybe add a little distortion. For example as a send effect so you can really control in which freq domain you want to add some distotion (maybe 150-400 fe).
The track also feels really laid back. to give it a bit more speed maybe pull the snare back a few ms and the some might work for the bass. This speeds the track up a bit without changing the tempo.
The first part could do with some lead sounds imho.
Nice work!
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klippel
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Posted : Dec 7, 2011 22:25
cheers a lot mates, that is exactly the kind of feedback i was hoping to get.
i will hopefully find some time on the weekend to play with the track and incorporate your tips and come come back with an update
jekvan
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Posted : Dec 8, 2011 05:45
I loved the track,well maybe its the ganja speaking but this is definetly a better one than many of the stuff posted here.
I really love the strong kick.
I miss kinda the snare action in the "second" part of the track,there needs to be another lead element of main beat.
Also the trick of moving the snare a bit,it is good to try to both directions (moving few ms "left" tightens up the beat,moving it right makes the beat laidback more).
The track has a lot of space left (well,noobie opinion,it just feels like you can squeze more in several frecuency domains in the track),in this type of stuff maybe some god old sweeps would feel nice.Stuff like good old overused but still great sounding white noise sweep,to give it "sea" feeling.More effects to build tthe ambiance around,cool FX's,nice sweeps of pads and drones.
Also,nice trick I found out and used succesfully (lol yea one track in soundcloud haha)and doing so in current track I work,if you use some synth with an arpegiator,clone that track with the same notes.Change the synth to other sound,and arpegiate it as well,only different pattern.Both of those played together really fattens the arpeggio.Just make sure they do not collide in freuency range,if so you know what to do ,move octaves,EQ,you know your stuff.
Other then that,what is in is good I think.
From all the things I lost,that sandwitch cost me most :)
Oni Katsu
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Posted : Dec 9, 2011 02:12
Well, this is nice, the kickdrum is, a little too low, jus a little, make it more present, and there you go, i like the bass and all, its a good composition as far as i can tell, i dont listen to much prog tho!
http://soundcloud.com/li-fe
I said I like it dirty, not muddy.
Sound Surgeon
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Posted : Dec 11, 2011 13:24
Awesome!
Where is the album coming out?
makus
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Posted : Dec 11, 2011 15:06
Nomad Moon
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Posted : Dec 11, 2011 15:23
Quote:
On 2011-12-11 15:06, makus wrote:
I really do not get this waveform. Is it randomly drawn?
What do u mean? Insight from the masters would be nice
MrMaunus
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Posted : Dec 11, 2011 19:27
Really nice sounds and arrangement+ the mixdown complements them.. I like especially the evolving lead, pads and fat bass.
klippel
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Posted : Dec 11, 2011 20:52
thanks again for all the kind comments working on the final version..
@makus: what is it with the waveform?
http://www.ektoplazm.com/free-music/stereofeld-frequenzwechsel "I've always been a believer in musical repetition to draw in the listener and make the music hypnotic. Another thing I believe in is repetition." Alan Parsons
Kryten
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Posted : Dec 12, 2011 03:15
I really like it!
And I cant really say much more than the others here...Kick a bit low and it feels kind of chilled/laid back...But I really like that feeling.
