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minimal progressive track
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l_shr
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Posted : Aug 23, 2005 18:47
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Willy Wonka
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Posted : Aug 24, 2005 03:54
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Make a bit more softier beggining, with sample enterings in fade in, guitar not even close to track beggining. Can be removed easily to keep vibe.
Bass and kick are not good, everything is flat and not natural. Somehow i miss the point of music, it's like sample collection for me. Thou i've been same some time ago. Practice dear! Everything playing on different notes, tune the sounds a bit. I'm pretty sure it is one of your first tracks. Samples are way to simple, delays and reverbs made for effects as far as i understand.
Ask Ron Lyner for help, he seems same style with you! Ask him to review this minimal style!
keep it up, and practice as much as you can! |
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Sonari
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Posted : Aug 24, 2005 06:23
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think u gotta practise a lott .. but hey every1 gotta start somewhere
there is no real main melo, wave or some bassline in it ..
little boring ,u'r not really making something.
and after u'r intro it changes suddenly, u just cut and paste the sample and put something else behind ? hide it more (pitch,time stretching..) .. and more eq !!
goodluck
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Lithium
IsraTrance Junior Member
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Posted : Aug 30, 2005 23:05
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hi l_shr 
iŽd like to hear this one but the period had expire, can u upload it again please..
i like it minimal & dark hehe 
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