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mind games - 138 progressive
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alfalfa
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Posted : Dec 19, 2006 19:49
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alfalfa
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Posted : Dec 20, 2006 17:12
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orange
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Posted : Dec 20, 2006 17:20
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its nice!
it has a nice kick but im not fun of your bass/bassline!
fx and structure is fine! synth work is ok! but i would like some more!
what is missing is percussion work with some better bassline and it will groove alot more!
if ur aiming towards minimal than ur on the right path
but if ur aiming towards progressive than u need to change the feeling of th track my using more percussive elements and some more hooky synth work!
overall its a nice piece of work thats missing a hook and developement but im sure ull work it more!
keep going!
orange
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alfalfa
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Posted : Dec 20, 2006 20:39
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thanks for the comments
yeah, im not sure which way to take it, whether to keep it minimal or turn it into something more prog with alot more synth n percussion.
cheers
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aQuaFeeLL
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Posted : Dec 24, 2006 16:59
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Good stuff bro!
Sounds good if you put more volume 
Your fx are good and synths too
All the best |
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