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minddoctorsmakeacid
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Posted : Oct 21, 2011 15:05
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On 2011-10-21 11:12, kabbalisticvillage wrote:
the lead that you have until like 1:53 is good but cud be much better and at around 1;53 this other sick lead comes in but then it leaves when u build up...keep it in work on that part more...otherwise its pretty sick.Peace.
Thanks for the feedback bro, to make that lead better what would you sudgest? some automated bandpass maybe?
minddoctorsmakeacid
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Posted : Oct 22, 2011 20:05
I replaced the link above with the last pre mix/mastered version and in a few days Ill replace this link with the final one!
Thanks to all the great critisism from here andd from facebook that made this track go from 3 to 5 stars!!!
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Posted : Oct 23, 2011 10:21
First of all mix , Cant be that high sounds taking control on the downs , Theres somthing there - Bass , But this is not an real bass , This is like "As if" Bass (More trrrrrrrr , And far , Then somthing real and stable) , Bring more air between bass kik (There the power exist) .
More eq work and care of each sound alone and then keep work on the all global sound , You have the technique and good ideas , Story to tell , Now the time improving the sound . This is an great work m8 just have be more polish to be shine , Thats all , + More effects on (Bring it be more wet , Grand and cinematic - Sound sound abit dry) .
Your work here (To do) Is more to down (Deep & Fat)
and to the side's - Larg (If you know what i mean) .
Cheers ..
minddoctorsmakeacid
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Posted : Oct 23, 2011 20:03
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On 2011-10-23 10:21, Cardinals Cartel wrote:
First of all mix , Cant be that high sounds taking control on the downs , Theres somthing there - Bass , But this is not an real bass , This is like "As if" Bass (More trrrrrrrr , And far , Then somthing real and stable) , Bring more air between bass kik (There the power exist) .
More eq work and care of each sound alone and then keep work on the all global sound , You have the technique and good ideas , Story to tell , Now the time improving the sound . This is an great work m8 just have be more polish to be shine , Thats all , + More effects on (Bring it be more wet , Grand and cinematic - Sound sound abit dry) .
Your work here (To do) Is more to down (Deep & Fat)
and to the side's - Larg (If you know what i mean) .
Cheers ..
I have not mixed it yet theres only very rough EQ and thats it, forgot to mention that sorry.
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Posted : Oct 23, 2011 20:29
hi doctor nice work
all is very very good ...
Main stuff i would change is the first part with the squelches when the second one comes in it becomes too loud, so notice that, at minute 3.00 they are too quite.
And another thing is the bongos congos parts at the end and through the track they have no room or purpose you can barely hear them but they make the track overloaded and seem overused.
Some sounds seem have no clarity like they have been filtered to death. End part lowpassing the highs than came back, lol you went crazy with that i don't really like it and it sounds just like and accident.
I really like the power of the track with some small adjustments it will be a great track. Watch those parts that are taking and not adding. All the best.
http://soundcloud.com/magimix-1/chilling-forest-whispers Wierd shit happens :)
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Posted : Oct 23, 2011 21:10
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On 2011-10-23 20:29, daark wrote:
hi doctor nice work
all is very very good ...
Main stuff i would change is the first part with the squelches when the second one comes in it becomes too loud, so notice that, at minute 3.00 they are too quite.
And another thing is the bongos congos parts at the end and through the track they have no room or purpose you can barely hear them but they make the track overloaded and seem overused.
Some sounds seem have no clarity like they have been filtered to death. End part lowpassing the highs than came back, lol you went crazy with that i don't really like it and it sounds just like and accident.
I really like the power of the track with some small adjustments it will be a great track. Watch those parts that are taking and not adding. All the best.
Cheers bro, Im gonna try and fix that, I do get carryed away in adding to much st4uff and end up with a dirty overfilled sound, its one of my mistakes I tend to fix! http://www.MindDoctorsMakeAcid.com
