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aXis
IsraTrance Full Member
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Posted : Dec 22, 2010 07:24:54
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jeeboomba
IsraTrance Full Member
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Posted : Dec 22, 2010 11:22
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nice work man.. the breaks can be tighter imo.. love those fm noises... the lead starting around 4.50, i think puts the rest sounds back.. a lil less reverb maybe?
good flow! keep em coming... boom |
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knocz
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Posted : Dec 29, 2010 20:46
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I agree with jeeboomba, the lead at 4:46 it killing the great track you have there. I'd change the sound completely, to something really more saw(wy) and trippy, like 4 saw oscillators, 2 one one octave and 2 on the one octave above, having one of each octave slightly detuned down and the other 2 detuned the same amount up, and with some FM at your own taste Or any other super duper saw you've got. If i'm tripping while listening to this I just want this section to be electrifying my brain. After all it seems like it's the most important part of the track..
The rest it great, I like it, and I really don't like this style of music.
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