metamorphosis music
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Posted : Oct 16, 2012 03:52:16
hey guys just working on finishing up new trance track, ne feedback much appriciated,
cheers
smoker
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Posted : Oct 16, 2012 06:24
your intro to long and after that you have break
from 3.18 5.26 track need to be run (or make short intro)
i think intro need to be between 30-1min and not more
but you have a lot cool stuff there really good stuff
if you make track start from 5.26 to the and it will be really greet
klippel
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Posted : Oct 16, 2012 07:56
epic. awesome. stuff.
i would keep it exactly as it is, with the long intro.. it tells a story from the beginning and has such a nice vibe. some of the best stuff i have heard here!
http://www.ektoplazm.com/free-music/stereofeld-frequenzwechsel "I've always been a believer in musical repetition to draw in the listener and make the music hypnotic. Another thing I believe in is repetition." Alan Parsons
aje
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Posted : Oct 16, 2012 10:05
Epic indeed! Musically, and sound-design wise some of the best I have heard in this workshop in the 2 years I have been hanging out here. That would totally give me chills on a sunny dancefloor, and I envy you, bastard!!! Especially that part after the break, like Yahel when he was still cool.
However, the mix kinda sucks. It sounds very narrow and kinda muffled, with this epic of a track you should use the entire stereofield, not just the middle, and you could achieve much more seperation between the different elements. Now they are somehow masked behind each other sitting there in the middle.
So my verdict
Music: A+
Sound-design: A+
Mix: C
If you mix this properly this is fucking awesome and I would buy this in a heartbeat!
metamorphosis music
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Posted : Oct 16, 2012 20:14
hey thnks so much guys , really tryed to do something different with this one combine ambient,trance,n psy n wasn't easy, yeh ur right aje mix could b better, i hate mixing so my main weakness , ill try my best to clean it up and get more seperation, if u guys hear nething else in the mix needs improved please point out
cheers
Najt
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Posted : Oct 16, 2012 22:19
great melody in the end! intro is maby to long but beautiful anyway
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Posted : Oct 16, 2012 23:26
nice melo, good energy.
smoker
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Posted : Oct 17, 2012 05:43
metamorphosis if you need i can mastering it for you
when you finish track upload wav file to me and i will mastering it for you if you like
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metamorphosis music
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Posted : Nov 8, 2012 05:25
hy so made bunch of adjustments heres where shes at, please let me know if ne suggestions to further improve mix, thnks
Epoptes
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Posted : Nov 8, 2012 14:13
super cool,direct to my favorites !!
metamorphosis music
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Posted : Nov 9, 2012 03:41
thnks mate
just made few tweaks
Grevinsky
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Posted : Nov 9, 2012 10:10
waaaa beautiful stuff mate. Lovely atmosphere over the whole track. Nice work with the granulared voice sample.
Nice 303 starting at 6.30.
This would be awesome too hear at sunrise. Something smooth and beautiful after a night of crazyness .
Really great stuff!.
Since im in a internet cafe and is wearing super crappy headphones i cant comment the mix really. But sounds good in these headphones.
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http://soundcloud.com/mechanical_species
metamorphosis music
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Posted : Nov 10, 2012 17:32
thnks bro, heres new mix:
metamorphosis music
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Posted : Nov 11, 2012 15:54
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Posted : Nov 12, 2012 02:42
Especially that part after the break, like Yahel when he was still cool.
, really tryed to do something different with this one combine ambient,trance,n psy n wasn't easy, yeh ur right aje mix could b better, i hate mixing so my main weakness , ill try my best to clean it up and get more seperation, if u guys hear nething else in the mix needs improved please point out
