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Posted : May 5, 2011 20:59
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On 2011-05-05 15:48, dj chichke wrote:
the sound is pretty good. it lacks some sharpness at the highes but it's pretty balanced besides it. most of your sounds are good but few are little bit cheap...
for example this thin sound that start too play at 2:03. also the lead at 3:05. i think it's faking also.
the track has potential, but it's little bit messy (i don't speak about the mix, i speak about the arrangement).
I second that.
Really like the chunkie kick bass combo but the formentioned thin lead kinda messes with the phatness. Maybe a bit more meaty leads and FX would do some good here.
Just Flyin' By....:)
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Posted : May 5, 2011 22:47
i like your work as always man, but not this style, and what i think the broz mean above is, u using some sample cd's or something? or some weak samples, instead synthesise some nice trippy sounds on some vst's and make it happen properly, otherwise you got the flowz bro, keep at it!
bomz
JudaiKa
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Posted : May 5, 2011 22:50
keep up,,, guys above me gave good points
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Posted : May 5, 2011 23:37
Not bad but the long slow melody at 5:30 is kind of annoying, doesn't really drives the track... the other synths are good although the background pad can become tiring too.
Although the sound palette has been well selected there is no protagonic driving sound, no synth will take control and make people dance u see? they are just part of this big wall of sound that bores me.
Also percussion seems the same all the way, same classic ohat on the offbeat and snare on 2 and 4.
All of your build ups are just pitching lines but no other element helps you create tension, no kick retrigger, or cymbals, snare rolls, filtering, or so... seems like you can work more on the tension release thingy.
Not bad track, reminds me of Wizzy Noise, it just requires a little bit more definition.
Good work and thanks for sharing.
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Posted : May 6, 2011 14:52
Allright first of all thank u guys for listen to my work, and for all your critic, usefull, but im happy with the track the way it is, so i allready have it mastered, i think it changed a lot in the mix to the positve side I will think of your adwise in my next tracks Thanks for listening, big hugs to all of you.
Vishudda
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Posted : May 6, 2011 14:58
Mastered by Solar System in Sonesta Studio:
anyone want the track in wav, just write me and i will give
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Posted : May 6, 2011 15:27
plz have a listen to my new tune, more melodic than ever 
