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Melodic Fullon 145bpm Finished track || What do better?

Oni Katsu
Li/fe

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Posted : Oct 3, 2011 19:09:58
So guys, its kind of finished, i'm not sure if i'm happ with the intro yet, maybe some other synths playing, other melodies, but at least theyre some ideas...





Don't mind being rude to me, k?
I only wanna get better for every track            http://soundcloud.com/li-fe

I said I like it dirty, not muddy.
Oni Katsu
Li/fe

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Posted : Oct 9, 2011 14:06
You guys! come on hahahaha this always happen to me, lol            http://soundcloud.com/li-fe

I said I like it dirty, not muddy.
Cardinals Cartel
Black Machine

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Posted : Oct 9, 2011 14:49




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On 2011-10-09 14:06, Oni Katsu wrote:

this always happen to me





Never give up m8 .. !



Far away from being my taste and style .. (As the moon far from earth) - Kind of 'Wedding' tones .. (For me) But i could find some good points and sounds in here . Think is one of the most aggressive happy music i have ever heard (When this is alone an good surprise) - When bass and kik is WORK so the truth , Myn (Must be said) - This is what keep me in your story

Liket the bass kik combo and the sound but yet there places need better mix in .. For example 05:21 to 05:47 When you can see in 05:48 He back (Bass) being dominant again - Thats mean there Area's you should take more care of/In/With .

Overal realy enjoyd .. More of/From the way you are building your music and the sound then the style i have heard in .

Keep the good work .. ! .




SoulSpin


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Posted : Oct 9, 2011 15:53
Cool melody and good atmosphere.
Good work dude.
faxinadu
Faxi Nadu / Elmooht

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Posted : Oct 11, 2011 05:16
ok.. its good, all sits nothing bad about it, but what to remember this track by? why THIS track and not 342374370438 other fullon tracks that sound the same, mix the same, flow the same and express the same vibe.

ok so you know how to do all the stuff that it takes to make fullon. but do you want to be a "fullon technician" or to make art?
          
The Way Back
https://faxinadu.bandcamp.com/album/the-way-back
Oni Katsu
Li/fe

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Posts :  704
Posted : Oct 11, 2011 14:46
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On 2011-10-11 05:16, faxinadu wrote:
ok.. its good, all sits nothing bad about it, but what to remember this track by? why THIS track and not 342374370438 other fullon tracks that sound the same, mix the same, flow the same and express the same vibe.

ok so you know how to do all the stuff that it takes to make fullon. but do you want to be a "fullon technician" or to make art?



The fullon vibe is fantastic. It's fabulous, and achieving that vibe is almost all i can wish for hahhaha, but of course! I wanna make art, it's what i'm trying to make!!

@Black Machine: I took care of what you said too, it turned out better by making the bassnotes less prominent again            http://soundcloud.com/li-fe

I said I like it dirty, not muddy.
OpTiKoOl
IsraTrance Junior Member

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Posted : Oct 11, 2011 15:31
it sounded nice but u're using the same fxs (that sound 2:22/23, and others) over and over again in the length of the track...and in some sections too often. i would change that.

try to make another pack of fx's and use diferent ones in diferent sections of track. you'll create that call and response thing. but instead of making with lead to lead. you'll do it sections to section.

          http://www.soundcloud.com/hybrid-species
Oni Katsu
Li/fe

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Posted : Oct 11, 2011 23:48
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On 2011-10-11 15:31, OpTiKoOl wrote:
it sounded nice but u're using the same fxs (that sound 2:22/23, and others) over and over again in the length of the track...and in some sections too often. i would change that.

try to make another pack of fx's and use diferent ones in diferent sections of track. you'll create that call and response thing. but instead of making with lead to lead. you'll do it sections to section.




Great advice! thanks, i know it takes a little "compilation" skill... but i think i can do that...

I'm giving it my best!            http://soundcloud.com/li-fe

I said I like it dirty, not muddy.
UVBlast


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Posted : Oct 12, 2011 11:51
Like some people already said, you repeat a lot some sounds. Apart from that, keep up the good work.

Cheers!
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