alajarvela
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Posted : Jul 24, 2011 15:31:39
So i've been working on this for about three hours and I don't really know how to construct this. Few questions:
Is the intro too short and is it ok?
Overall mix ok? Bass isn't too muddy and kick is punchy enough?
Does the song build up logically or is it too fast?
Should I add some pads, leads etc, if yes could you show some samples of which kind?
I need serious help with this, this is maybe the best thing I've ever done and I wanna finish this!
kabbalisticvillage
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Posted : Jul 24, 2011 16:27
I dont really get the intro...i think its ok.
The bas/kick is pretty good.
I think the song has a good feeling to it....everyone has their own style so building it up logically is to each their own..i like the first lead a lot.the second is a little to soft for my liking.Finish it.Fast.
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Posted : Jul 24, 2011 17:39
Hey ..
If its an realy your best work so far so ill try not to disappoint you , But always think and know im do it from my heart .. So take all the way it is (If you like) Theres no harm meaning behind thats for sure .
Now listen the intro , I dont talking now on this net sample (This is another thing that i cant find or understand what he is doing there - But u want it in so fine) You can hear the intro pad is more strong at the vol and quality from the bass kik when they come in , Also fill the intro more , I finding myself say that lots of time in here to ppls - If you want produce .. Produce , But dont base in your music on other sounds you have found here and there , This is un right move/Act and sure not serious thing to do .. This is simple ! Everyone can do that . For the bass - Try eq it better , Try make it more short , You will get more air between basskik . Bring the down area be more fat and real . First break at 0:50 think ive heard this 'Spread' Sound somwhere (Maybe in another track of you) And what about this talking pad in there .. ? This is realy needed ? He said 'Nazi' ? Whats the connection to the track i dont know .. Seems u just put samples in without any care or diagnosis .. We allready talk about and this is not the right way to work , This is preconcession . 01:24-01:29 Almost cant hear the bass when he should run together with the kik down there in the front .
Keep working ..
alajarvela
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Posted : Jul 24, 2011 18:10
You're right about the bass, it's not fat enough but I really don't have much experience with programming vst's especially for psytrance so I'm pretty much trying to trial and error here.
The speech samples are from Albert Einstein's famous speech about Nuclear Weapons. What do you mean with the spread sound?
Kabbalistic, thanks for your input! Also thank you Cardinals
Joćo Pedro Veiga
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Posted : Aug 1, 2011 19:11
The tune is Awesome!
The second lead needs another layer with the same notes... something to "fill it up" a bit.
Keep'em coming.
Joćo Pedro Veiga
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Posted : Aug 1, 2011 19:20
Btw, Cardinals is right about the voice samples. Do something with them... CLEAN them up, add some layers, slice it up a little. A delayed voice sample flowing in the backround when the loop kicks in would be nice. Although that's been made quite a few times. Still, make it interesting.
And try to find a cleaner version. I can't hear a word he says. I'm sure there's a better video/audio of it somewhere.
As to the kick and the bass, I actually like them the way they are. A lot!
