psyraal
IsraTrance Full Member
Started Topics :
77
Posts :
768
Posted : Jul 25, 2011 02:44
Sick intro dude, it's like a weird and a darker approach to something robotic and futuristic, but once your reversed kick hits the entire flow is lost, you should have some of those sick sounds continuing on and on along with the kick and bass combo (you know what i'm talkin about).
And altought i'm not a fan of simple build ups, yours appears to have some potential because of that rising up synth as the overall atmosphere gets darker and darker (you know, those dropping sounds). Also your acid lead is sick man, keep it up, add some glitch to it (again, you know what i'm talking about), make it even better, but always think: "If you were the listener, would this part catch your attention to go on to the next part and listen even further..?".
One last thing, try having some breaking meltdowns in your breaks, and by this i mean impacts, dropdowns, sick effects and stuff to make a statement, like: "This is where this section stops!". Statements like this will tell the listener that your tune is advancing, because if you're going for the small and simple breaks road the listener may find your tune weak and thus giving up on further listening, so state that shit out! (But don't do a sound that appears in your tune 4 ou 5 times to state sections, do it smoothly, like a river flow, and a rock on some spots of that river.)
